Crit goes here! Comments are screened until I reply to them, after which I will leave them unscreened (unless you specifically ask me to rescreen your comments for you.) Note: I generally do not accept criticism on inter-character relationships unless said crit is using the relationship to explain a deeper characterization flaw. I will gladly explain anything you like! But I do kind of get irked when people say "I liked this relationship better in canon" or "you're making this dynamic too fast/slow/mushy/whatever" unless it's extremely OOC.

... is my standard blurb. But, er, hopefully it won't come to that, since his creators are also CFUD members, and therefore they have critting/smacking rights. :|d

Hey~ Mind chatting with us about the game?

Hey! Mind chatting with us about the game?

Hey! I dunno you guys, but we've got clues to puzzle out. Mind chatting with us?

Hey Emiri~ You and your team up for a chat?

Okay guys! Team huddle time! We have some serious business to discuss here.

Poll #1356858 derp
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... I swear I need to know this for work, okay.

CLARIFICATION since I am le dum: "Both" is more like "I use both forms, but in specific ways" and "either" is "I use them interchangeably."

[nothing yet]

This is going to be my handy-dandy repository for a) all the stuff I ask Liet and beanclam about re: Devin, and b) all the stuff I make up on the fly while I'm RPing, so that Liet and beanclam can correct me if I've goofed something up or gone too far. I do intend to play him like I do all my other characters (AKA I make up lots of shit when necessary), buuuut his creators are always, alwaaays welcome to correct any and all assumptions I make. On that note, headcanon may occasionally get retconned! Hopefully not, but we'll play it by ear.

( Headcanon from his authors o/ )

( Personal Headcanon )

[nothing so far]

Name: Devin Wilshire. He also answers to Dev.
Age: Officially 17, but unless he's an early summer baby, then he's probably 18 by the end of the series. (Note to self: ask when his birthday is.)
Hair: Blond! Natural too, if his eyelashes and eyebrows are any indication.
Eyes: Brown.
Height: 5'9" (172.5 cm)
Weight: ... derp I suck at this part. Seems pretty average, sooo 150 lbs? Or so?
Bloodtype: Dunno! Will add this to the list of random stuff to ask beanclam and Liet about.

Medical info: Other than the usual set of childhood accidents (falling off his bike, falling off his moped, a broken leg from that one time he jumped from high up because he was sure he could fly if he could just manage to miss the ground, normal stuff like that), he's probably got nothing in particular. Right now he's in good health.

Physical Traits: Normal human! He's not really a fighter, but he can hold his own when it comes down to it.

What's Okay to Mention: Annnnnything. Meta is fine too. He will ADORE it and work it into his theories and squish it and call it George.

Notes For the Psychics: NOISE. Lots and lots and lots of noise. Devin's always thinking about something ~*amazing*~. Even when he's just having a normal conversation with someone, he's probably thinking about how likely it is for them to secretly be a member of the mafia. Or, if they ARE a member of the mafia, he's probably thinking about how awesome it is that he's talking to a member of the mafia. He's quite sharp and observant, but a bit distractable. Also: very honest. The few lies he tells are pretty obvious, and usually for a good cause. Like critical cactus replanting operations.

Abilities: Huuuuuman. In the classical D&D sense, even. He's flexible enough to pick up simple skills fairly quickly (like the magic he learned in the third volume), but he doesn't have nearly the amount of raw talent to really make something of it. Otherwise, he's normal.

Shapeshift/bodyswap/etc.: YES please <3 Tell me and we shall do awesome things.

Hugging/Draping/Kissing/Nicknaming: Oh hell yes. :D Be careful: he drapes back.

Fighting: Sure! I doubt he'll be getting into many of them, but I'm cool with it.

Maiming/Killing/Death: Also no problem. Just chat with me while we're threading and we'll work stuff out.

Healing: Yes please. ... he'd probably find it FASCINATING, in fact. And maybe let himself bruised a bit more than usual just so he can :D :D :D over the awesomeness of healing magic.

Stealing: Go for it o/

Cooking: He can make some things, but I doubt anyone else will want to eat what he makes. Like peanut butter and pickle sandwiches.

Character: Devin Wilshire
Series: Mark of the Succubus
Character Age: 17

Canon: She’s a demon with a license to seduce. He’s a perfectly normal high schooler with a perfectly crappy life. Together … they get into a lot of trouble. The series centers on Maeve, a brand-new succubus fresh out of Erebus (aka the demon world.) At first, everything goes great — she blends in at Barlow High School, makes a couple of awesome friends, even develops a crush … and then accidentally makes said crush into her first target. Oops. Unable to remove the mark and doubly unable to kill him, she spends the rest of the series righting what went wrong and trying get them out this alive. And if a little evil gets triumphed over in the process, that’s fine too. Fortunately, she has a number of allies to help her, including Aiden, her perfectly normal high school boyfriend, Junael, a shapeshifting imp, and Devin, Aiden’s wacky best friend.

Friendly, exuberant, and often overdramatic, Devin is possibly the biggest oddball in the series, even including the demons. His mind runs at a mile a minute, with his mouth only a few steps behind his thoughts. He has a conspiracy theory for every occasion, especially the weird ones, and he is not at all afraid to explain them to anyone who will sit still long enough. In detail. With diagrams. (That’s probably the point where you should start running.) His crazy imagination is fueled by his love for all that is weird and terrible, especially B movies and sci-fi. Still, for all his eccentricities, it’s not without purpose; he’s quite observant, with a keen eye for details that most normal people overlook. He figures out that Something Is Up with Maeve long before his best friend Aiden does, for example. And there’s always a grain of truth at the bottom of his theories … even if you have to sift through several layers of mafias, aliens, and demons to get to it.

Sample Post:

All right, CFUD! You don't have to pretend any more, 'cause I am on to you!

I hafta admit you had me going there. Zombies! Cabins! Scenic radioactive lakeside property! Classic zombie camp setup, that. Did I mention the zombies? Real live undead zombies! I told Aiden that Louisiana still had to have a bunch of ‘em. It’s the only thing that explains that godawful cajun restaurant across the street from Tony’s. I mean, how do you ruin a perfectly good gumbo unless it’s made out of people? Anyway, the point is that most people see zombies and think zombie camp. And I wouldn’t blame ‘em one bit. There are some seriously excellent examples of zombiehood moaning around here. Not just the shambling type either! There was a whole group of ‘em practicing a Michael Jackson routine on the way in. I haven’t seen that kinda zombiversity since Night of the Radioactive Riverdancers from Hell 2: Zombie Boogaloo. Betcha most normal people would think it's a zombie camp and leave it at that.

But! If I’m anything, it’s definitely not normal! Eccentric, maybe. Or brilliant. Oooh, I like the sound of that one. By the time I got to the lake, I could definitely tell that something was fishy. Something even fishier than those tentacles! I swear I’ve seen ‘em somewhere before. Like on a lunchbox somewhere, or something. I’m talking about that psychic toucan mafia I keep running into. What kind of self-respecting zombie camp lets a bunch of birds run the place? Zombies are all about territory. If they let somebody else in on their shambling turf, then they’re not gonna be fast enough to get all the brains they need. Plus there's the part where these toucans are psychic, too. They told me all sortsa great things! But they’re not exactly the type to be making deals with mindless zombies, y'know? And neither of ‘em is strong enough to keep that barrier going by themselves. I knew there had to be something more! Something lurking behind the scenes to make sure that Camp works the way it does. Some sort of shadowy figure, who rarely shows themselves to the rest of the camp so they can preserve their evil bastard aura of evil.

So when someone mentioned the Director, all the pieces just fell into place. Camp Fuck You Die isn’t a zombie camp at all: it’s an extra-dimensional mafia battlefield! Forced into a loveless marriage with the mafia don Stephano, the Director had no choice but to flee to the beautiful radioactive swamps of her former estate. She knew her family had been hiding a mysterious alien force field there. And if there’s anything that could keep her safe, it was definitely an ancient alien forcefield. But Stephano was ruthless, even to the last! He cleverly turned his hitmen into zombies, brought in a special Italian contingency of toucan interrogators, and managed to make it inside before she could activate the forcefield. She managed to contact the woodland creatures and raise her own gorilla army to combat him, but even with their help, she could barely hold off his advances. Terrified for her life and happiness, she performs a desperate summoning ritual once a month, calling forth the world's greatest heroes to join her in the fight against evil!

I’m right, aren’t I? You don’t have to be all quiet like that, Captain Gorilla. I am totally okay with answering questions! I’ll even go through the whole thing again, if you want. And this time, I’ll use the diagrams.

(( Voting here! 55 INs / 0 OUTs; 100%. ))